You have provided an overall proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, as well as considering how your ancillaries work alongside your video and contain references to the video to create a lasting impact on the audience. However, you have not elaborated on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
You need to: 1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each 2) Explain what ideas you took on board from this research and how/why you incorporated it into your own work (it's not enough to just include the images) 3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided an overall proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, as well as considering how your ancillaries work alongside your video and contain references to the video to create a lasting impact on the audience. However, you have not elaborated on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each
2) Explain what ideas you took on board from this research and how/why you incorporated it into your own work (it's not enough to just include the images)
3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience